Friday, May 16, 2014

Review: Hooked by Liz Fichera

Hooked by Liz Fichera
Book One of the Hooked series
Publisher: Harlequin TEEN
Publication Date: January 29, 2013
Rating: 3 stars
Source: Copy sent by the author, from a giveaway

Summary (from Goodreads):

When Native American Fredricka ‘Fred’ Oday is invited to become the only girl on the school’s golf team, she can’t say no. This is an opportunity to shine, win a scholarship and go to university, something no one in her family has done. 

But Fred’s presence on the team isn't exactly welcome — especially not to rich golden boy Ryan Berenger, whose best friend was kicked off the team to make a spot for Fred.

But there’s no denying that things are happening between the girl with the killer swing and the boy with the killer smile...

What I Liked:

I have some seriously mixed feelings about this book. On the one hand, I think I liked several core parts of this book in general. On the other hand, several core parts of the book pissed me off. So, I'm pleasantly split, hence the three stars.

Fred is about to join the men's varsity golf team at her high school. There is no women's team, so she'll be taking someone's spot on the men's team (a fact that she did not know before joining). All of the boys on the team basically hate her for it, because she got their friend Seth booted, and she didn't have to try out. But Fred is AMAZING at golf. Her dad is the groundskeeper at the country club, so Fred practices there all the time, sans lessons, partners, proper clubs, tees, or shoes. But nothing seems to go her way once she joins the team. Seth is out for vengeance, and Ryan Berenger isn't going to stand in his best friend's way.

Something I really liked about this book was the treatment of the sport. Golf is obviously something very precious and important to Fred. She takes it as her escape, her motivation to go to college (something the Native Americans on this reservation don't seem to be in the habit of doing), her passion. She is better than any of the boys on the team, but she doesn't act entitled or look for special treatment. I'm not a fan of Fred, but I like her attitude towards golf. Honestly, I don't like golf, but I like sports in general, and I like how important the author makes it in this story.

Another huge part of this book is the fact that Fred is a Native American, and she lives on a reservation. At times, it definitely seems like Fred is embarrassed by this. She is embarrassed by her trailer home, her mother, her old van. She doesn't have a cell phone, she is very cut off from modern technology and civilization and culture. The Native American culture wasn't heavy in this book, but the fact that Fred is a girl, and a Native American girl, is important.

I honestly didn't like the story of this book. It sucks to say, but it didn't interest me. I didn't like the romance, either, though I guess I was happy to see the resolution between Ryan and Fred. The ending of this book was pretty good. Played is next! I think I'll like Riley more. She seems sweet. Genuine.

What I Did Not Like:

Right from the start, there were several things about this book that pissed me off. Literally from the first few pages. Take a look at my "About Me" page on my blog, you'll understand. Fred is NATIVE AMERICAN. Not INDIAN. How many times do I go through this in my life?! Seriously?! In a published, edited book, too? It's one thing for the ignoramuses in this book to call Fred and the other Native Americans "Indians" or Pocahontas" or whatever. But Fred calls herself an Indian. She refers to herself and the rest of the tribe as Indians. Ugh ugh ugh. This bothers me so much. I AM INDIAN. As in INDIA. That does NOT make me Native American. The two labels are NOT interchangeable, on one side or the other. 

Anyway. The beginning was super slow. I was thirty pages in and dying. When were things going to pick up? Were they ever going to pick up? I understand all about setting the scene, but it was really dragging out the scene, not setting it. I almost stopped reading, THAT QUICKLY INTO THE BOOK, but then I was like noooo, I don't "DNF" books, and also, I want to read this book before I read the sequel, Played. They're companion novels, but you know me and my OCD. So I kept reading.

But the beginning is very slow. There were times in the middle of the book that seemed to go in circles, honestly. Fred and Ryan, constantly stepping around each other, sending mixed messages, getting caught in the wrong place at the wrong time, etc. It seriously bothered me that Ryan never cleanly did ANYTHING. It also seriously bothered me how willing Fred was to lie about anything and everything, to one-up Ryan. Like, how petty. How childish. Play nicely, children. 

I didn't like the story, or the romance. Honestly, I didn't really care about Fred's journey as a girl on a men's varsity golf team, or her struggle to contain her feelings towards Ryan, or her struggle to not be a complete b****. Oh but she really is one though. She kept leaping to conclusions and blaming Ryan. Not that Ryan shouldn't be blamed for some things. He should have put his foot down a lot of times. But he didn't. So they're both stupid. I dislike the two of them. That's kind of bad, when the book is split between their first-person perspectives. Yup, another series that alternates between the girl and the guy, and involves companion novels, instead of sequels.

Would I Recommend It:

Honestly, not entirely. It's not one of those magical contemporary romance novels that will sweep you off your feet. I didn't really like the story overall, and I didn't really like the romance, either, so there was enough to bring my rating down. I would say that you're safe skipping this one - you're not really missing out.


3 stars. I think I liked this one overall, but eh, it wasn't amazing or anything special. I am very happy to see that Fichera included a heavy amount of diversity in this book/series! But I wasn't a fan of the story in general. Look out for my review of Played, book two, next week!

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  1. I had this on my list, but now I'm re-thinking it based on your observations. I've read a few like this lately and am not in the mood for this type of heroine. Thanks!

    1. It's kind of ehh, probably not worth your time. If you DO read it, I hope you like it more than I did! You're welcome, Sophia ^_^

  2. I wasn't particularly keen on this one before reading your review, and now I know that I won't be reading it.
    As for the issues with calling Native Americans - Indians... well blame us Spaniards and Christopher Columbus, for thinking he had reached The Indias when he arrived in America! ;)

    1. Ha! I hope you read something awesome instead. And I know all about that! It still pisses me off, every time. Ugh. :D

    2. I know what you mean! I had to explain to people here all the time that my Indian boyfriend was from India, where they wear turbans not feathers... *rolls eyes*

    3. Seriously though. Like, everyone, stop with the ignorance. *bhh*

  3. While I appreciate that the author played around with gender roles, however lightly, such disrespect for a whole culture is not appealing in the least. Why would someone choose to write about Native Americans without any kind of proper research, only to end up with something that is quite offensive? I can't for the life of me understand such authors. So I think I'll pass.
    Thank you for the detailed review!

    1. I totally agree, Maja. It just seems wrong and totally off. Meaning no disrespect to Fichera. I hope you read something amazing!

      You're very welcome - and thank YOU for the comment!

  4. A very useful review with pros and cons. I was frowning at the Native Americans and Indian portion of your review. Seems like a very big misconception that is presented in a book. Shall be giving this book a miss.


    1. It's kind of bad when authors are trying to target a certain stereotype and then butcher it themselves. Oh well.

      Happy reading, Michelle!

  5. Yeah, I better not read this one. It will only lead to unnecessary frustration and/or hatred for both parties. I do wonder whether "Native American" or "Indian" or "American Indian" is the more prevalent term among Native Americans. I remember history classes always said "Indian reservations." Depending, the word choice might make sense since it's first person narration, but I can still see why it would be frustrating. Thanks for the great review! :)

    1. The frustration was huge in this book :\ I'm not sure what the "proper" term is, but I've always been taught that "Native American" is accurate.

      You're welcome!


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